Digital design drafts

I started to create some magazine drafts of what I would like my images to look like. Here is a double page spread mock up that I made featuring an image of Rihanna:



I would probably have the model in the place that Rihanna is in, in my magazine so that I can place text on either side of the page but also have room on the right hand to focus on what the artist is doing now and where you can see them in concert. I would probbaly created a faded box for the text to go in to make it stand out more from the background and I would also probably put the title/quote in a solid block shape. I would perhaps leave more space above the artist's head to out the title instead of it coverrng their head and I would also maybe try and leave space for more pictures at points in the page.