17 Mar 2011

Teacher Feedback on drafts:

Feedback on Front Cover:
  • Good pose and good colours
  • Interaction between the model and the masthead (the way it's placed behind) is good
  • Hard to read the writing in courier new (make it bold)
  • Need 2 or 3 cover stories
  • Add barcode
  • Enlarge masthead (possibility)
  • Crop the image to her arm (at the side; right)
Feedback on Double Page Spread:
  • House Style is not clear
  • Reference Anthem (in the masthead)
  • Reference her name (in the masthead)
  • Quote her
  • Font may not work
  • Put quote over her?

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